I thought it would be interesting to post two poems in different styles involving the same idea. Which are you partial too? One seems more thoughtful, the other more free flow. It is fun to experiment with writing styles! I completely encourage it, for it may open your mind to a place that you did not know existed. As a matter of fact, try a different medium of art such as painting or acting. If you are predisposed to one discipline, more than likely you will also excel at another! Good luck!